The remade titanic!!!

L.G.   To put my story in paragraphs

S.O.S.  The said is dead

Once upon a time there were three best friends, that were named  Myah, Lani, Meah. One day it was Meah’s Birthday. Her parents owned a boat  so she had it there.All the kids loved it, and when all the kids we're gone, And the party was over. But except Meah, lani and Mia.Meah’s  little brother Max playing with the engine. But nobody saw him  doing it. Then! Then Suddenly the engine wobbled and stopped.

The girls room in the boat had water coming out of the sides. They thought it was a leak but it got faster and faster, so it definitely wasn't a leak. Meah was getting really scared. She sobbed, “No we're all going to die!!!” In the next room was Meah’s parents room. There room was ffffffffllllllllllloooooooooooooooodddddddeeeeeeddddddddd!! Then SUDDENLY The parents were gone! Meah and her friends couldn't hear them so they raced to Meah’s parents room. Then the  room came a little teary, “But,” mumbled Lani. “We need to get out of here let’s go.” Then the boat leaned to one side. Then the girls all scream together, “AAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!”

The boat was nearly gone, But then Lani had a great idea! Se, Called Lani Pointing to all the things that are floating around. Jump on to something floating! Come on let’s swim back, Added Meah.

Anyway it wasn't too far away from sur!

THE END!!!