Thursday, May 18, 2017

FIDGET SPINNERS!

L.G. use paragraphs to organise my ideas.

S.O.S -use at least 5 word from list.

Picher this? You just went to the shop best 4 less.You get a glow in the dark fidget spinner.And everybody at school has one.So you had to bring  yours to school  then.CRASH! You drop it and someone steps on it.What a waste of money. Well Mr Elder I think fidget spinner should not be at school.Here are  my three reasons why.


I think we should not have fidget spinners at school because.Firstly it distracts kids when they are learning. The only reason why fidget spinners were made because it's for the people that can't stop fidgeting around and need something to distract them. Fidget spinners  are really addictive. So kids take them everywhere at school. Like on the mat or on the playground or the park.


Secondly. Fidget spinners are a waste of money. Say you go on a holiday and you bring your money because you want to get a fidget spinner because there really cool in palm st north and you go to by one but it’s so much. But it’s to cool so you  get it. When you get home you say. Were ‘my fidget spinner. You lost it. What a waste of money!!


Finally. Your parents get really annoyed with Them. Because if they want your attention you are so addictive to it you can’t look at them. Fidget spinners are really annoying because they can spin over 2 minutes. And they just  would never stop.


Finally. People say that without a fidget spinner your life is so boring. But that's completely and absolutely rubbish. Loads of people bring there fidget spinner to school. But were only allowed them at playtime. But there’s loads of things to play like. Get something out of the p.e. Shed or play on the playground.v You could play handball. You could play things on the feds like. Do gym rugby soccer,tackle tag or you could play four squre. There are my three reasons why.


Mr Elder I think our school should be banned from fidget spinners. Our school would be better if there were no fidg et spinners!

Wednesday, May 3, 2017

2.5.17

L.G. create a mood of fear/horror
s.O.S. language that creates a fear

Dear Mum and Dad.

I just jumped of the boat and i'm ducking down in the ocean. I am trying to swim to land.But there is about 30 thousand bullets going off in the sea.My heart is pounding. Bang!!! A bullet has tackled me down already. My  friends pull me out of the sea while I slowly get back up. My friends run into people. Then down he goes while my brothers chip down with the pain shouting help and screaming are dead. I duck under the wrench and grabbing my gun BUT!!!
Ou oh I run out of batteries then I'm down.
I get winded and I start to scream out with pain and I group down to the ground. Then one of my bones stick out and I slowly walk back to safety.

Love you so much and I will miss you alot!
From McKenna!