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Once upon a time there was a cloud, that came from the sea. It was definitely a personification cloud! It went along the city looking for things to do. It goes along the city, seeing everyone and what people are doing.

It was a personification cloud, and it went on adventures! That weren't easy! But the wind direct it. It went everywhere like… through parks, the city and across the sea. Everyone would look at it. It was stared at a lot!! IT sore a fire out in the city. It was so big no one could take out. So the cloud DID!!! With its water. The cloud was a personification cloud!!!!

I hope you liked it. I think it was cool how the cloud took out the fire, but they could've explained it a little better. I like how they said it came from the sea. But they could've put some more detail in it. I think the appropriate age for for this story is 7-18. The rating for this story is a 3 out of 5. So I hope you liked it.

Taking flight

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This story is really interesting story. So the people that like green screens or like to explore with there imagination, you may like  this story called, Taking flight.

Droom, droom goes the car. In the front was dad. And in the back in the car seat was a little boy and his favourite stuffed teddy! The dad says “ We are going to grandpa's house.” “ I am sorry its on such short notice, but this meeting is very important.” “ Were here.” “ Hello dad.” “ Well i'm off, good bye.” Then grandpa and the boy went on a great adventure!!! They used lots of their imagination and had a great time. They did adventures like sailing the seas, in a boat surrounded by big comfy crocodiles. Trying to bite us!!! They did things like… under the sea snorkelling, going in an airplane and travelled to the moon!!!

I really liked this. The grandpa and the boy used a lot of their imagination. The age I would recommend for this book is 4-15 and the rating is a 4 out of 1-5. I hope you Aenjoyed this story!!!