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On Monday september the 11th, the year three and four were set up a challenge for their audience. It was called Master chef. They  had to make a wonder full restaurant for people to come and enjoy the best food someone has ever made! I went to one Everyone had a part to do like.. Setting the tables up.Putting the decorations on the tables, and around them to. The cookes were cooking up a storm!!! And some people would be greeting people in and telling them where to sit. People say it was very nice. They found a eiffel tower out back so they hung it up on the wall. It looked very very nice! They cooked the best meals!

For there entree they had onion soup with a packet full of of flavor. Aldo with soe bread on the side with the margerine buttered on it.  For there main they had, cheese cheese and bacon plus smooth mashed potato all mixed together. It was delicious. Their table was set up beautifully, with flowers and cool placemats with their menu on it! They had fancy cups with fancy straws. It was a great set up with beautiful food!!!

Meanwhile when we were eating, the waitress came over and said… “ Are you enjoying your food?” So of course i said… “ Yes, i love it!’’ But the dessert was a little, um i don't know the words for it? Any way is was about time everyone started leaving. So i did to, But first i went to go say bye to my daughter in the kitchen. And it smelt… AMAZING!!!!!!  And everyone was doing a great job cooking and getting ready for the food to come out. And when i sore the sink, man it was full with… DISHES!!!!!

So when i was about to leave the waitress said to me. “ We hope you liked your food.” So i just said. “ yes i did i loved it, bye.”

Mr Elder

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Just picture this. You have so much work to do and you so much to do in just five minutes and you have no idear how to do it, but you are so tired because you had to wake up early. Then… 1 2 3 4, BOOM!!! You fall straight asleep. Well Mr Elder if you don’t want that happening, you should listen to me. Here are my three reasons why.

Firstly, all people hate school, and only like two people like school. Out of 100 there would be 2 or 5 people that like school and 98 or 95 people hate school! Well Mr Elder do you want people getting bored and falling asleep in class time? No. I didn't think so. So id suggest this. Make morning tea and lunch time longer. That way they will have way more fun and want get bored in all the lessons. And all the kids will want to come to school!

Secondly, About energy. All kids need energy! We need more play time play time because, if we have more play time we get more energy from all the running around. And if we don't have energy we can get high graded!!! Sometimes when people are dehydrated  some people get headaches  or feel a little sick. So do you want half of the school to go home? Do you?

Thirdly, If you get more play time you can make lots of friends. Like if new kids want to make friends but they’re shy they don’t have to hary they can settle into their new school. Do we want loners sitting on the seats with no friend? Do you ?

Finley, you all are probably going to say you need to learn to get good grades, so then you get a good high school and college. So you can get a job and a good future. But actually, maybe if you give us more play time we will work harder at learning time.And if they are not learning they have to go down the target, because no one likes going down the target or going down to white zone!!!

So Mr Elder there are my three reasons why I think we should have longer play time!!!