I got hit by a car!!!

L.G.  To put my story in paragraphs

S.O.S. Intro, action, problem, solution

One day, One family got hit by a car, “But wait?” Let me start from the beginning.“Oh just great we have ran out of chicken,” called mum. “Looks like we're going to Pizza magic,” shouted mum to the kid’s. “But dad and his mate’s have the two car’s,”sobbed Molly, because she knew we had to walk!!!

Mum, Molly, Elliott, and I started walking to Pizza magic.

“Come one you can see the store from here, can you just walk a little faster,”mum yelled. “Ok come on, hold on to my hand to cross the road.”

Then on the main road, mum was on the left side. Which was the busiest. Her mum was called Kim. Then we all walked into the of the road waiting to cross the other side. Then one, two, three, four, a drunk lady in her car just came driving into the middle where we were. CRASH!!! Then my mum drop’s to the drown. I get winderd, because my mum’s elbow went into my head. Everyone scream’s especially the girls.  Then mums says,“ her ring dad  to come her,” called mum. Pointing the the to Elliott. “Please, go, run off the road.” Then comes dad and grandma. So Dad rings  the ambience. A minute later we all heard the ambiences siren going off. Me more, me more, me more. I go into the ambulance  to see if i’m ok. Then mum goes in. She was badly injured!!!

A day later they found out that mum had a broken shoulder!!!  But lukey I was okey. At the end of all of it everybody was okey. And mum had a cast on so it could              

                               Heal!!! The end