Mr Elder

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Just picture this. You have so much work to do and you so much to do in just five minutes and you have no idear how to do it, but you are so tired because you had to wake up early. Then… 1 2 3 4, BOOM!!! You fall straight asleep. Well Mr Elder if you don’t want that happening, you should listen to me. Here are my three reasons why.

Firstly, all people hate school, and only like two people like school. Out of 100 there would be 2 or 5 people that like school and 98 or 95 people hate school! Well Mr Elder do you want people getting bored and falling asleep in class time? No. I didn't think so. So id suggest this. Make morning tea and lunch time longer. That way they will have way more fun and want get bored in all the lessons. And all the kids will want to come to school!

Secondly, About energy. All kids need energy! We need more play time play time because, if we have more play time we get more energy from all the running around. And if we don't have energy we can get high graded!!! Sometimes when people are dehydrated  some people get headaches  or feel a little sick. So do you want half of the school to go home? Do you?

Thirdly, If you get more play time you can make lots of friends. Like if new kids want to make friends but they’re shy they don’t have to hary they can settle into their new school. Do we want loners sitting on the seats with no friend? Do you ?

Finley, you all are probably going to say you need to learn to get good grades, so then you get a good high school and college. So you can get a job and a good future. But actually, maybe if you give us more play time we will work harder at learning time.And if they are not learning they have to go down the target, because no one likes going down the target or going down to white zone!!!

So Mr Elder there are my three reasons why I think we should have longer play time!!!