Wednesday, May 3, 2017

2.5.17

L.G. create a mood of fear/horror
s.O.S. language that creates a fear

Dear Mum and Dad.

I just jumped of the boat and i'm ducking down in the ocean. I am trying to swim to land.But there is about 30 thousand bullets going off in the sea.My heart is pounding. Bang!!! A bullet has tackled me down already. My  friends pull me out of the sea while I slowly get back up. My friends run into people. Then down he goes while my brothers chip down with the pain shouting help and screaming are dead. I duck under the wrench and grabbing my gun BUT!!!
Ou oh I run out of batteries then I'm down.
I get winded and I start to scream out with pain and I group down to the ground. Then one of my bones stick out and I slowly walk back to safety.

Love you so much and I will miss you alot!
From McKenna!



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